Paper Reflection

Unfortunately, I was very anxious when I wrote this paper. But then again I am always nervous when I have to write an essay. I'm not very confident about my writing skills. I just felt like I couldn't think of anything to say! And then when I finally finished it, and read over it, it seemed like a 4th grader could have written my paper better.
I really liked that we got to all meet with Franny and talk about our weaknesses of our essays. I feel like she really helped me to understand what I needed to do to improve my writing. She made me feel less nervous about the assignment gave me a lot of good suggestions. I'm still a little bit worried that the main topic of my paper isn't as clear as it could be. I'm also afraid that my paper is very ordinary and doesn't really stand out from the rest of them. I just haven't had any extremely unique experiences with the technologies in my life!
What I do like about my paper is that I am very detailed. Franny mentioned that it was good that I explained what each type of technology was, instead of just assuming that everyone already knew. I also used a thesaurus throughout the paper, so I hope that will improve my variety of vocabulary! It's also nice to know that I can always rewrite this paper for a higher grade if I am dissatisfied with the grade I get on it. If I get below a 3.5, that's exactly what I am going to do.